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brutalforce |
06 Apr 08 |
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Hi there,
a new track made with fl studio again...
I'm still working on the eq'ing/mastering, let me know what you think about it!
gr,
Danny |
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Reviews 104/84 | Posted tracks 5 | Posts 120 | Karma 241/13 | Friends 8 |
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JHS |
06 Apr 08 |
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Netherlands |
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Comments:
Mhh the first one to review your track. I am going to do my best to help you and give you a clean review!
Like the build up in the beginning but expected. The baseline you introduce is imo a bit standard and to present in the front of the track and I must say that for a 5 minute long track it takes of a bit late (at about 3 minutes).
Like the work you have put in but I think a more catchy melody could lift the track to a higher platform.
Hope you can do something with my input.
Greetz
JHS |
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Reviews 140/40 | Posted tracks 2 | Posts 301 | Karma 529/169 | Friends 10 |
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almar |
07 Apr 08 |
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Romania |
well, it's sounds clear, but I think it is a base for a track. You need to add some extra layers to this base, a main catchy melody
hope it helps cheers |
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Reviews 6/14 | Posted tracks 2 | Posts 22 | Karma 29/15 | Friends 0 |
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Paralize |
07 Apr 08 |
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Comments:
wow the synth kicks in a bit too hard at 0.48
and again at 1.14. Lower the volume a bit. Same for the hats you introduce, they are just a bit too loud.
I do not like the leading synth which is continuously pumping through my speakers. You made it the main aswell...
My suggestion is: get rid of it. I like the underlaying synth with the few chords, make these a bit lower in volume and create a phat catchy melody and if it was me, i'd not use this church bell piano 
Overall the arrangement is quite nice. The mixing could be way better (think of good eq-ing)
I have the feeling the samples you used are standard. try some FX on it.
If I'm wrong, please correct me.
I'd like a bit more variation on the beats, just to keep it interesting, they are sufficient, but could be more variated.
Hope this helps.
rgds. Paralize
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brutalforce |
10 Apr 08 |
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Global XS Artist +
Netherlands |
Thanks for the reviews...I'm gonna work on it! |
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Reviews 104/84 | Posted tracks 5 | Posts 120 | Karma 241/13 | Friends 8 |
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Goldman |
17 Apr 08 |
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Comments:
Bring some atmos sound in .Lose the reverb on the kick .The sub low is a bit to low.
Try to build a climax and you have something .
I like the bassline , groove .`
Bye !
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PABLO |
01 May 08 |
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Spain |
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Comments:
hey danny good jobjavascript:addBB('comments','  ')i like the bassline is very nice,the melody is good.i like your stylejavascript:addBB('comments','  ')
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MitchellPainter |
02 May 08 |
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Comments:
Tiiiight track. I really like the transition melody, although i would cut its vol back a little bit. I would fill out your kick a little too. Everything meshes pretty well though, and it sounds good. You said you used FL studio, do you like it? |
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Mitch - Detroit, MI |
Reviews 53/44 | Posted tracks 9 | Posts 76 | Karma 113/10 | Friends 0 |
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jinek |
28 Jul 08 |
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Comments:
it is very nice for dance floor |
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BOOM Shankar |
Reviews 81/60 | Posted tracks 5 | Posts 147 | Karma 200/57 | Friends 7 |
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SAMRAT123 |
07 Aug 08 |
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Comments:
great beats,excellent mixing ,i did'nt think all the sounds went with what one looks for after that really nice start, i would work on that one "hook" that'll really change this track from a good track to a great one,keep goin my friend u aint that far away anywayz |
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cource |
08 Aug 08 |
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Italy |
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Comments:
 i like this work..in fact i listen it 2 times |
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ChC @ COURCE |
Reviews 20/17 | Posted tracks 6 | Posts 37 | Karma 52/49 | Friends 12 |
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