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Track updated to version 2 - 29 Jul 08 |
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SAMRAT123 |
26 Jul 08 |
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alwayz,alwayz learnin..............need ur feedback & reviews guyz !!!  |
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PABLO |
26 Jul 08 |
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Comments:
GOOD WORK SAMRAT MAYBE I TRY A BETTER FLOW |
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Oesterberg_Ost |
26 Jul 08 |
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Comments:
its just like some danceable jazz... good intro with this slowly fading rhythm...
and nice minimalistic arrangement with these cool drums and the fat bass... maybe you can get more out of your sound by giving them some compression to get them more powerful, more brilliant...
nice synth at 2:40 - very little but big effect!
generally you work here with endless loops of the same - and thats really "efficient" - making the room wide and a good flow...
somewhere around 4:00 could imagine some really deep clear bass...
and around 4:30 - with nothing more than the drums - you have to get big with beat to get the hands in the air! think you have them to bring really in front & give some more power and you have the people dancing like in an endless loop... |
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olegz82 |
27 Jul 08 |
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I would say that in my opinion you have too much reverb and flanger effects in your track. Your music is ''around'' somehow and as Oesterberg_Ost already said, feels like it should be more minimalistic. But of course it is my personal opinion based on my personal sound feeling. We are all different and we percieve things differently. Keep up the good job man!!!
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rajender15 |
27 Jul 08 |
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Comments:
you are almost there.... bit work on beats is required, otherwise you have improved leaps & bounds.... gud job |
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SAMRAT123 |
27 Jul 08 |
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thanks guyz....(sardar)  |
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buji |
27 Jul 08 |
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Comments:
Really good track.
Some great sounds flying around, really love the delayed Jazz organ sound gives it a lot of character.
Cant really find any faults with it just maybe put a bit more punch in the bass drum.
Great track mate. |
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jinek |
27 Jul 08 |
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Comments:
this track is hard to undarstand for me)) i'm turning "Arrangment" off  |
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olegz82 |
28 Jul 08 |
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You should create a places in your track where the ears of the listeners can ''rest'' a little bit in my opinion. Keep it up! |
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Reviews 29/26 | Posted tracks 2 | Posts 54 | Karma 65/24 | Friends 5 |
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SAMRAT123 |
28 Jul 08 |
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i thank u olegz for ur valueable comments & suggestions,& hopefully in the future i will uze them to better my music |
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Fobee |
28 Jul 08 |
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Comments:
your track is a bit too low on volume i think
and i agree with olegz 82 on his comments
and i would chage a bit the arrangement here and there, some pauses ...
but the track's gotta lotsa potential
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